While marking our Literacy books this evening I came across an excellent piece of writing.
The learning objective was to describe a character, using adjectives, descriptive phrases and a comparison. Here is what I found in his book:
"Then something appeared from the door and onto the ramp that looked like an alien with golden skin dipped with shampoo and vinegar. His behaviour was naughty. His eyes looked like rubbers, he was very strange and is UFO was very unusual. It looked like a boiled egg and the colour was a colour I've not seen before. How he moved was like running but not walking. He had 10 eyes and 9 arms. He was very strange indeed."
I am delighted with this work. He has used all the Success Criteria and written an excellent character description. I certainly wouldn't like to meet this character!
Well done! A Class Dojo point for Superb Work is deservedly yours!